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- Rob Harman
- Username: UnaffiliatedRob
- Location: cochecton, NY
- Joined PRX: Apr 17, 2005
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- "Family Separation"
- Summary: Jose tries to find out how separation by immigration is affecting the families in his community.
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Review of Family Separation
Rob Harman
Posted on April 26, 2005 at 04:41 PM
I sm just going to say flat out that this piece, most of it anyway, is good. This is a very interesting topic, however I feel it was a bit to flat and monotone which turned me off a little. It could of used some background music. And I know the narrator is foreign but more coaching could of been done to make the reading a little smoother, not so much because it was unpleasing to the ears, but because it made me feel like the narrator was struggling to much, and listners might pick that up alot and begin to focus on the narrators ability to speak and read english. Overall though this piece is good, just add music.