I like the concept of this radio drama. The stereo effect is nice (it's unfortunate that too many people listen to radio in mono). However, sometimes the silences in this piece are quite long for radio. The overlapping of voices is a bit distracting, and makes this piece a little less accessible. While I didn't feel entirely convinced by the voice talent, I do feel the script has merit. There is some strong storytelling in the writing. A re-recording with some improvements in production and pacing would do this piece justice.