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- Andre Rosario
- Username: andrerosario
- Location: , DC
- Joined PRX: May 08, 2005
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- "In the Gym, Trying to Fit In"
- Summary: Sitting in the gym, watching the girls play b-ball, and trying to pretend you belong.
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Review of In the Gym, Trying to Fit In
Andre Rosario
Posted on September 05, 2005 at 01:49 PM
This story had beautiful imagery and was very descriptive. The gym sounds of course were a plus. It's very realistic in that it reveals the feeling of wanting to fit in. We all want to fit in. This was a very creative way of expressing that feeling... I think it was too short though. I was left wanting to hear more! I wanted to know more about this girl and why she had no friends? We could of delved more into the essence of who she really is...