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- Michael Eddy
- Username: meddy
- Location: Cambridge, MA
- Joined PRX: Jun 01, 2005
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- "In the Gym, Trying to Fit In"
- Summary: Sitting in the gym, watching the girls play b-ball, and trying to pretend you belong.
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Review of In the Gym, Trying to Fit In
Michael Eddy
Posted on December 14, 2005 at 07:57 PM
This short story is well edited. Though it's short it is also rather pointless. The female reporter describes an outcaste of high school sitting and staring. It does nothing to describe what happens after that however. And so there for I am not quite sure what to think.