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- Janie Shorty
- Username: janiejeter
- Location: Thoreau, NM
- Joined PRX: Jan 30, 2006
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- "What We Wish We Could Tell Our Parents"
- Summary: Mom, Dad: About That Bullet Hole in the Basement...
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Review of What We Wish We Could Tell Our Parents
Janie Shorty
Posted on May 09, 2006 at 02:12 PM
This piece is about the things that children don't want to tell their parents. The whole story is a collage of answers from teenagers, telling us things like them being gay, stealing money from their parents, siblings doing drugs, and some other eye-popping secrets. One thing that could have made this story better is if they asked the question in the beginning of the story. This would have introduced us more on the topic rather than having to read the details page. I really like the idea of the collage, it keeps giving excitement, one answer after another. It really makes you wonder what their parents would do if they found out all these secrets.