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- "11 Central Ave. #5"
- Summary: This week's installment of the radio comic strip...
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Review of 11 Central Ave. #5
Eric Brotman
Posted on October 03, 2006 at 03:26 PM
"11 Central Ave." #5 is better than the earlier efforts. The recording and mixing are (and have been) good. Some of the acting is good and some is uneven, which begs the director to take a stronger hand and/or quickly gain more experience, especially since different generations comprise the cast. Producing a weekly, original theatrical piece 4 minutes in length is challenging. Perhaps the series will improve further with sufficient time and patience. I think the single biggest and fastest advance would come with more deftly written scripts. The producer might find that relinquishing a hat or two, and delegating or collaborating more with respect to some tasks, would elevate the results.
--Eric Brotman