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- Traci Tong
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- Location: Boston, MA
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- "Melvin is Dead"
- Summary: First-person response to a surprising phone message from my brother about my old dog Melvin.
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Review of Melvin is Dead
Traci Tong
Posted on July 30, 2007 at 01:08 PM
Hilarious and witty sound postcard on the loss of a family pet who's older than God.
Great first effort and I encourage more entries.
Writing is personal and her delivery is at times a bit fast but very conversational.
Sound of phone calls need to be boosted and clearer as it can be distracting, but you get the essence.
Love the ending!