Piece Comment

Review of Communityville (1st Grade Room)


like the intersting opening, nice voice over-- "closest to the coat room"

(although) a little bit of voice or natural sound while "playing communityville" would be nice...

I am so glad the host is a dentist, I always like dentists! I take teeth seriously.

and dogs, who got the woof sounds?

Of course, me personally, I would be at the radio station. Is there a box for the radio station?

At any rate, the jobs inside the shoeboxes are very, very important.

I can't believe you used a church bell as the head of the town!

...because in America there is a seperation of church and state on purpose... still I admit, I enjoyed the music with the tweety birds at the end of the piece.

la,la,la,la,... .