I Am Not A Metaphor > Comments > "A Raisin on the Plate at Applebee's"
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- Creighton King
- Username: creightking
- Location: Tacoma, WA
- Joined PRX: Jun 14, 2007
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- "I Am Not A Metaphor"
- Summary: Andy's parents deliver the news that they were to move to Arizona. At Disneyland.
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A Raisin on the Plate at Applebee's
Creighton King
Posted on May 23, 2009 at 12:32 PM
Beautifully written, funny and sad at the same time. Mostly funny. Your delivery is good, but you elide some syllables and some of the sounds bump into each other before they fall out of your mouth. If I may be so bold to speak for other listeners, I daresay your audiences want more!