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- Fernanda Sanchez
- Username: Fernanda
- Location: Carbondale, Colorado
- Joined PRX: Jun 08, 2009
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- "Overachiever"
- Summary: Is it wrong to push the limits? Erin Bilir is a high school overachiever, and doesn't think so.
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Fernanda Sanchez
Posted on July 25, 2009 at 05:11 PM
I think the piece is good. The only thing I could recomend is to make the intro a little more interestig as well as an outro. The narrator's voice is good and the fact that is Erin telling the story just makes it more real.