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- Gilbert Orosco
- Username: Persistance
- Location: Yreka, CA
- Joined PRX: Jul 06, 2004
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- "Truck Stop"
- Summary: A story about how honesty still is the best policy
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Review of Truck Stop
Gilbert Orosco
Posted on July 08, 2004 at 11:35 AM
Inspiring story; unfolds slowly though. I thought there were plenty of opportunitys in the story for the author to 'fill in holes' and perhaps add to the suspense or at least drop some hints as to the outcome. Overall good plot, not so well performed.