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- Larry Gardner
- Username: ljgardner
- Location: Apex, NC
- Joined PRX: Jun 15, 2004
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- "Entrepreneur"
- Summary: An ingenuous young taxi driver applies for a bank loan, inspired by his father's vision of American opportunity, to start a steel mill.
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Review of Entrepreneur
Larry Gardner
Posted on August 09, 2004 at 01:17 PM
What a nice and though-provoking interstitial! Great to give you a grin before a grim newscast. It's sure to remind anyone who has ever tried to start a business of that excitement you get that can so easily be deflated by a bank loan officer!
I'd like to have been able to hear some of the lines a little better--a little work on the mix would help.