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- Nick Clark
- Username: LearnTek
- Location: Rochester, NY
- Joined PRX: Jul 05, 2004
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- "Our Adult Prom"
- Summary: Former HS geeks -- Muslim, ex-Jehovah, gay/straight and fabulous attend an "adult prom" for an NYC friend who's moving on...,
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Review of Our Adult Prom
Nick Clark
Posted on August 09, 2004 at 02:38 PM
Nice piece, nostalgic and mirroresque. Well written but delivery/editing is a little too tight and it loses its rythm. I would have thought a bit of appropriate music under the piece would add to its texture. With there modifications, I would rate this a 5.