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- Username: [redacted]
- Location: Seattle, Washington
- Joined PRX: Jan 12, 2005
Piece Information
- "Josh"
- Summary: Eighteen year old Josh Dayton lives in the real world, and his own fantasy world.
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Review of Josh
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Posted on January 22, 2005 at 07:48 PM
This piece profiles Josh, a Maine teenage poet with a unique and fascinating fantasy card game. The narrator's descriptions are interesting but I wanted to hear more of Josh's life as well. I would have loved to hear more of his mother and his house and school. The segment where Josh lists his goals is powerful and the best window we get into who he is. If that part came earlier we could get more engaged in who he is earlier. Overall personal and engaging.