A piece that could be shortened by at least a minute. Also, this piece did not grab my attention to great effect. But I will say that the target audience is well shown, and the message is clear. A strong open and close will improve this piece in my opinion.
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Produced by Noah Magen
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Ernest Bluford
Posted on April 29, 2006 at 04:25 PM | Permalink
Review of On (Not) Riding the School Bus
A piece that could be shortened by at least a minute. Also, this piece did not grab my attention to great effect. But I will say that the target audience is well shown, and the message is clear. A strong open and close will improve this piece in my opinion.