This first person essay takes a great topic and presents it in a way that would be good for print, but does not work so well for radio. The 25 seconds of intro music is more than twice as long as is warranted, and it's repeated again at the end. The delivery is weak and uninspired, detracting from the subject matter. The content of the commentary is good, but it is too long and unfocused to hold interest in radio. I would edit the five minute piece down to two minutes and strengthen the narration to make it more appropriate for radio.
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Produced by Vince Lasorso and Bernadette Cahill
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Phil Corriveau
Posted on November 12, 2006 at 11:08 AM | Permalink
Review of The Physics of Peace
This first person essay takes a great topic and presents it in a way that would be good for print, but does not work so well for radio. The 25 seconds of intro music is more than twice as long as is warranted, and it's repeated again at the end. The delivery is weak and uninspired, detracting from the subject matter. The content of the commentary is good, but it is too long and unfocused to hold interest in radio. I would edit the five minute piece down to two minutes and strengthen the narration to make it more appropriate for radio.