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- Ernest Bluford
- Username: E_Daniel_Bluford
- Location: Euclid, OH
- Joined PRX: Mar 10, 2006
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- "Arranged Marriage"
- Summary: Looking at arranged marriage through my mothers eyes.
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Review of Arranged Marriage
Ernest Bluford
Posted on March 21, 2006 at 07:49 PM
The start of this piece I believe, could be stronger. The story is good, but to grab the listener's attention. Using shorter sound bytes and a bit of music in the background would make this piece stand out. The end was quite sudden If this is the first part of a piece then some sort of transition needs to be there to signify that there will be more to come.