The start of this piece I believe, could be stronger. The story is good, but to grab the listener's attention. Using shorter sound bytes and a bit of music in the background would make this piece stand out. The end was quite sudden If this is the first part of a piece then some sort of transition needs to be there to signify that there will be more to come.
Comments for Arranged Marriage
Produced by Swati Rayasam
Other pieces by SpiritHouse Inc/Youth Noise Network
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Ernest Bluford
Posted on March 21, 2006 at 07:49 PM | Permalink
Review of Arranged Marriage
The start of this piece I believe, could be stronger. The story is good, but to grab the listener's attention. Using shorter sound bytes and a bit of music in the background would make this piece stand out. The end was quite sudden If this is the first part of a piece then some sort of transition needs to be there to signify that there will be more to come.