Your peice pretty good. I thought that it was good how you talked about how you got introduced to the song. But it would make your peice even better if you talked more about how you love this song instead of kind of going off topic, talking about your life that doesn't really have anything to do with how you love the song.
Review of That's My Song: Aliens Exist
Nancy Nixon
Posted on October 25, 2006 at 05:41 PM
Your peice pretty good. I thought that it was good how you talked about how you got introduced to the song. But it would make your peice even better if you talked more about how you love this song instead of kind of going off topic, talking about your life that doesn't really have anything to do with how you love the song.