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- Ra Ra
- Username: Erinrose1
- Location: , WI
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- "Juvenile Detention"
- Summary: A look at violence and other ongoing problems in The Baltimore City Juvenile Detention Center
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Review of Juvenile Detention
Ra Ra
Posted on December 12, 2006 at 05:15 PM
I agree that with better organization, this piece could be much larger than the blurb the narrator has made it. Poor transitions and a weak commentary do not do justice to the provacotive, well-rounded information and interviews from every angle of this story. The conclusion rubbed me the wrong way as well -- I thought it to be somewhat bold to state that this is a "problem is likely to plague the state for many years to come."