Comments by Phil Corriveau

Comment for "Erasing the Past"

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Review of Erasing the Past

This is a very well written, tightly produced news feature with a human interest appeal. Narrator Hana Baba has a good radio voice, and makes nice use of actualities from the public defender and some of the offenders. The "clean slate" program enables persons who have served time for some crimes to have their criminal record expunged. The story becomes more poignant when it is revealed that the public defender is herself an ex-offender. The pacing of the piece is excellent, and it is tightly edited and well mixed. There is a nice opening setup by Holly Kernan. Overall, this is a very good public affairs piece that would fit well in a news magazine format.

Comment for "Commentary: Uranium Mining Returns to the United States."

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Review of Commentary: Uranium Mining Returns to the United States.

This is an essay about the resurgence of uranium mining in San Miguel county of Colorado by the Cotter Corporation. It is well written, but would probably stand up better as a print piece, rather than radio. The delivery and phrasing is a bit troublesome, as is the technical quality and very low sound level. The content is well thought out as an essay, but it is a bit jarring to switch from third person to first person in the last sentence, with an "I believe..." statement.

Comment for "RN EuroQuest (#22): Artistic Oddities" (deleted)

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Review of RN EuroQuest (#22): Artistic Oddities (deleted)

This is a terrific example of the great radio that Radio Netherlands is so capable of producing. Superb production, excellent mix, and a nice choice of international topics. This weekly European Magazine program helps us to understand other cultures and our place in a world community. The narrator takes a bit of getting used to, but the writing is crisp and the half-hour moves along nicely. This is magazine programming as good as it gets, and compares very favorably with NPR’s magazine programs in terms of quality, and provides a different point of view which is refreshing.

Comment for "The IWW at 100: A Brief History"

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Review of The IWW at 100: A Brief History

This piece consists mostly of narration by the producer. For me, the piece drags quite a bit. I think it’s too long, and it lost me when an entire three minute recording of a folk song was played in the middle of the piece.. The production is amateurish, with microphone noise present, and the sound of a tape machine being turned on and off. While the material is engaging, the piece needs some serious editing.

Comment for "Web animation: a new genre of family entertainment"

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Review of A new genre of family entertainment

This is a fun piece and a delight to listen to. It flows nicely due to good editing and a great mix, with a nice use of music, sound and interviews. It explores the fascinating world of animation on the Internet and its appeal to both kids and adults. It’s a refreshing example of how the web can be used as family entertainment, and gives a glimpse of the people who create this animation. I thought it was very engaging, and I would have liked it to explore the world of the artists further, and pointed us in a direction to learn more about this genre. Overall, this is a great piece of radio.

Comment for "Casey Jones"

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Review of Casey Jones

This is a superbly produced feature about the history of the legendary African-American train engineer John Luther Jones, also known as Casey Jones. It is a delightful mélange of historic recordings, interviews, music, sound effects and narration that is beautifully mixed. This piece documents the spectacular train accident in which Casey’s passenger train collides with a freight train, and the resultant legend that was created and preserved in song. The old recordings are cleaned up beautifully, and the mix is as good as it gets. The feature will resonate with train buffs, history aficionados and lovers of folk music, as well as anyone who enjoys an excellent example of radio at its finest.

Comment for "Mammals" (deleted)

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Review of Mammals (deleted)

An interesting interview with a scientist discussing the causes of diminution and extinction of large mammals in North America and what might be done to restore the habitat by reintroducing them. A comparison of today’s classic large animals with prehistoric mammoths. Produced for the Natural Selections series, it’s an interesting five-minute science feature with background sound.

Comment for "The Balloon Hat Experience"

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Review of The Balloon Hat Experience

A tightly produced and enjoyable story about the effect that a balloon hat maker has on people of a variety of cultures. Well told and engaging, the piece talks about how balloons have an amazing ability to connect with people in ways that cross cultural barriers. Through interviews with a variety of people on the street, we find how much fun the art of making balloon hats is, and how much the balloon maker wants to pass along this knowledge to others. It’s a very imaginative and whimsical piece, and would fit in well with a magazine format.

Comment for "Small Town Doc"

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Review of Small Town Doc

A well produced piece about the emotional side of doctoring, “Small Town Doc” explores the empathy that we hope would apply to all physicians. As he treats patients for a variety of ills, Dr. Mike Lambke cannot help but recognize his feelings about his patients and their situation. In addition to dealing with his own feelings, Dr. Lambke helps his patients work through their feelings as well. Tight editing and skillful mixing make this piece move along nicely, and it covers a lot of ground during a short period of time. The reporter’s narration is well written and delivered in a documentary style. This feature would make an excellent addition to any health related magazine program dealing with a physician’s feelings for himself and his patients.

Comment for "Who's Your Daddy?"

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Review of Who's Your Daddy?

This piece is quite sensual with a first person narrative that is enjoyable to listen to. The pictures that Jenny paints are imaginative and engaging, as she tells the story of her thought process and decisions about having a baby. The pace is relaxed and comfortable, but it doesn’t drag. The style is very much like that of Ira Glass and “This American Life”, with good use of music and introspective story telling. The story is so good that it needed little editing, and was moved along nicely by the producer. The end of the story takes an interesting twist of self-discovery. More than just a piece about a woman’s biological clock, this narrative is an essay of self-exploration as it relates to a woman’s decision to have a child. I listened to the piece several times and liked it more each time, although the ending isn’t quite as strong as the rest of the work because it lost a bit of focus for me. Production values are high, and the overall quality of the piece is excellent.