Comments by David Swatling

Comment for "Dark Fluorescence: A New Piece of New Music" (deleted)

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Review of Dark Fluorescence: A New Piece of New Music (deleted)

Musically well-informed as the producer of this work is, and musically eclectic as the featured composer seems to be, this piece falls short of expectations. Well into the piece I decided it was about the creation of a work that had yet to be performed - how musicians make contact with each other, the birth of an unusual pairing of instruments, the composer at work in his office, etc. But I was wrong - the piece has been performed, and recorded (with much better quality than the interviews) and so I had to rethink what I'd been listening to all along. The elements are here for a better arts & culture piece, but the structure should be rethought. Unless the rawness of the work is in some way which I missed a deliberate choice?

Comment for "Many Minds in an Army of One (encore edition)" (deleted)

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Review of Many Minds in an Army of One (deleted)

Honest and compelling voices - mothers and sons, husbands and wives - talk about the war in Iraq. It should be said this piece is fairly one-sided. But given the recent events of an Army Mom snubbed by Bush, this perspective perhaps deserves wider coverage. The two strongest segments involve families divided: an intelligent mother's fear for her idealistic son; a wife's fear her husband will return dehumanized. But what could be most disturbing to some ís the Army Mom with a military background who joined the National Guard at age 42. She notes that the roots of the National Guard are no different from the Iraqi insurgency. She even admits admiration for them. The title of the piece is somewhat misleading since the slant here is definately anti-war. And the musical beds are sometimes intrusive. But it's powerful stuff all the same, and even if Bush doesn't want to hear what an Army Mom has to say, perhaps your listeners should.

Comment for "Talking 2 Sophia: A Child Speaks about 911"

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Review of Talking 2 Sophia

A touching perspective on 9/11, through the eyes of a two year old child. As Sophia's father grapples with how much truth to tell his daughter, she displays a disarming understanding of what happened. "Our building is okay," she reassures herself. But is it? The recent images of New Orleans come to mind. Children today have a lot more to worry about than if Santa is real. Sensitively written and narrated, this gently paced piece should find a place on any station on September 11th - or in any discussion about the impact of television images on young hearts and minds.

Comment for "Central America After the Wars Part Two - Gangs, Women, A Look Back"

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Review of Central America After the Wars Part Two - Gangs, Women, A Look Back

Stations looking for stories to mark Hispanic Heritage month in Sept should check out this series. This installment is made up of two very strong stories - one about women facing challenges head on in Central America, and the other about gang violence. Both are fine examples of investigative reporting with a healthy mix of personal stories, political context and sound-rich style. Unfortunately, the hour begins with an attempt to recap the complexities of US foreign policy in Central America twenty years ago in a ten minute report filled with sound-bites and archive sound. It's the weakest segment and not an ideal way to begin since one is likely to lose listeners before the more interesting stories get going.

Comment for "The Story of Ing (Doc) Hay-Frontier Herbalist"

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Review of The Story of Ing (Doc) Hay-Frontier Herbalist

A fascinating, meticulously researched and produced story about a little known chapter in American history. I thought I was fairly well informed about the 19th century post-Civil War period. But this program contained such a wealth of information I'd never heard or read before that I was a bit overwhelmed. For example, I don't remember ever learning about the 1882 Chinese Exclusion Act, or the 1888 Scott Act which so tightly restricted immigration that only 10 Chinese were allowed to enter the country one year. I never knew the derivation of the derogatory term "coolie." Or that at one time, the Chinese were the largest ethnic group in Idaho and Oregon. But part of what makes this story so interesting is how eerily some of the information about the Immigration Department is so topical today - and not in a positive sense. Then there is the interesting tale of herbalist Doc Hay, his partner Lung On and their extremely successful medical practice. The use of music, readings from letters & newspapers, and even staged scenes add richness to the authoritative experts and the well written narration. But my favorite parts are those who actually met Doc Hay - because it makes one realize this history is more recent than we might like to believe. If your listeners have an ear for history, drama or just good storytelling, treat them to this very different take on the American frontier.

Comment for "Reflections on Nagasaki by a Nez Perce Elder"

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Review of Reflections on Nagasaki by a Nez Perce Elder

This short first person narrative is ideal for stations which might not have time for the longer format programs commemorating the 60th anniversary of the bombing of Hiroshima and Nagasaki. Nez Perce tribal elder Horace Axtell's descriptions of arriving at Nagasaki just after the devastation are simple but compelling. A tree stripped of its branches, a smell which takes away his appetite, witness to an act of violence... and then a touching moment of human kindness amid the rubble. The understated connection to the wars of his ancestors, and his soft-spoken condemnation of war in general connect the past to the present perfectly. In the best oral history tradition, this piece is highly recommended!

Comment for "1776"

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Review of 1776

David McCullough, who might be considered the historian laureate of America, is a compelling storyteller and speaker. A lecture he gave about John Adams in Amsterdam last year inspired me to expand an idea for a half-hour program into a three-part series, for which I was grateful to have him take part. He believes history is as exciting as any novel and his books are written with that in mind which is why they're so popular. But as I keep learning over and over again, it's no easy task to make history come alive on the radio. In fact, I'm asking myself at this very moment why I keep attempting it at all. At the end of this program, he advises a young biographer, "Just say what happened - you don't have to trick it up." But I'm not sure that holds true for radio. Hearing McCullough speak in person is a great joy, but listening to a recorded lecture loses something in "translation" from live event to radio program. It's still full of interesting information, about both major players like Washington as well as little-known figures who played important roles in American history. The humorous anecdotes still bring a smile and, in the end, I'm certainly sold on adding his book to my long list of summer reading. And I honestly believe that radio can sustain a broad spectrum of styles and formats - so why not an engaging lecture by a great speaker about an important topic? Forgive me if this is perhaps less a critique than a contemplation, but these are questions I've been asking myself alot lately. Like McCullough, I believe history can be a lot more exciting than I ever thought it was in school. And it seems to have grown in popularity in recent years - in literature, film and tv. So why not radio? But how? Hmmmmmmm... At any rate, there couldn't be a better time for this piece than 4th of July weekend, notwithstanding the lack of fireworks.

Comment for "An Imperfect God" (deleted)

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Review of An Imperfect God (deleted)

With Good Reason may be a series produced in Virgina featuring Virginian academics, but this episode would be worth a listen by anyone with an interest in US history. Both segments in the interview-format program deal with the issue of slavery during the Revolutionary period - first through Henry Wiencek's biography of George Washington and then Phillip Hamilton's book about the lesser known Tucker family of Virginia. The engaging and well prepared host seems almost friends with the authors as they talk about the subjects of their books. A lot of interesting and not so famous anectdotes about Washington are revealed. And though historians are not fond of speculating beyond primary sources and actual documentation (which can sometimes make them rather frustrating to interview), we're given at least a hint that Washington's reasons for giving freedom to his slaves upon his death may have been personal as well as political. This program would certainly be ideal for lazy afternoon or evening listening during 4th of July weekend.

Comment for "A Danger to Self and Others"

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Review of A Danger to Self and Others

This glimpse into the Mental Health Division of Chicago Cook County Jail is so well-intentioned its difficult to find fault with it. Neatly structured from Recieving of detainees to the Release of one, it has a "day in the life" feel but the material was clearly gathered over a period of weeks. Along the way we briefly meet some staff members in each stage of the evaluation process, as well as a number of the detainees with varying degrees of mental problems. A narrator reads a well written script which fills in descriptions, details and background information. This is a solid portrait of a place of transit, a kind of Central Station of unfortunates, where so many pass through it's hard to tell them apart. Perhaps that's why the narrator's voice had such a sense of detatchment. But that didn't help bring me any closer to any of the people in the story. One detainnee blends into another, as do even the obviously caring and competent staff. And the whole half hour moves along on one level - without the ups and downs that must occur in a place like that every day - making it all seem a little safer than I imagine it really is. I never felt the "danger" of the title. In this sense, the piece might just be a bit too well produced - not necessarily a bad thing for the average radio audience.

Comment for "Bashing Back" (deleted)

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Review of Bashing Back (deleted)

I should first say I've admired David Gilmore's work on the series Outright Radio for some time. Each program tackles a different theme from various points of views, with interviews, personal stories and his own insightful commentary. The use of music within and between segments is always just right, and the production values extremely polished.

I listened to "Bashing Back" in part because just a few days after the first International Day Against Homophobia (May 17), this evening on a local Amsterdam LGBT program I co-host we'll have as a guest the American editor of Washington D.C. gay newspaper who was viciously attacked three weeks ago on the streets of this city I now call home - once famed for its tolerance and openness. I was hoping to get some different perspectives about violence against LGBT men and women. I wasn't disappointed.

The show is framed by two sensitively written first-person stories looking back at experiences of homophobia and harrassment, and how the writers overcame their fears and "bashed back" - not physically, but psychologically. In between them, Gilmore talks with (as opposed to "interviews" - his technique is great!): a transgender IT expert who won a job discrimination settlement against a Christian high tech company; and, in the strongest and most surprising piece, a young man who turned protests by a religious right organization into a means to support high school Gay-Staight Alliance clubs and literally laughs in the face of homophobia. It's not easy to find humor in such a serious topic, but that's what makes this item very special.

It's too bad this program is only available to PRI affiliates. Any station with an hour to spare should broadcast this during June for Gay Pride month. Or any time for that matter - unfortunately, homophobic attacks and harrassment of gay youth in schools are year-round phenomena. It's an issue that needs to be addressed and discussed; for as Chris Cain, the D.C. journalist who was attacked in Amsterdam, wrote in a recent editorial, "A more vigorous approach to openness would make a case for a society where each group is entitled to its own values, but not to impose them on others- whether through laws or through fists in the streets."

Comment for "Worlds of Difference: Finding a Niche"

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Review of Worlds of Difference: Finding a Niche

This polished production should fit any station's Think Global remit. Four sound rich stories from four countries where traditional societies cope with the changing global economy. But the first and last items from Peru and Mexico are very narrator driven, probably due to language differences. So much information is related, it begins to overwhelm the sound and feeling of the places and people who live there. The item from Scotland's Outer Hebrides was able to focus on the people - but why is the piece split in half with a station ID break? This interruption hurt the pace of the story and seemed unnecessary when it could'v been slotted in between two complete stories. But without a doubt, the jewel in this hour is Chris Brookes' poetic piece about the collapse of the Newfoundland cod industry where a whole town has vanished leaving only a dance to remember it by. A fascinating story, beautifully paced and produced, it's worth playing the whole hour just to let your listeners hear this bit of audio wizardry.

Comment for "Broadway Revisited"

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Review of Broadway Revisited

Gershwin in Japanese, German Guys & Dolls, Swedish Jets and Russian Cockneys getting to the church on time... This is the oddest assortment of old Broadway melodies you are likely to find. But what's most surprising is that it doesn't seem to matter in what language the songs are sung - the orchestrations are all so close to the original versions and the songs so well known, you hardly notice a difference. Hearing a song from Hair in five languages is simply hearing the same song five times - very strange indeed! I wish the presenter had a bit more energy, or irony. He seems a bit bored by it all. But half way through, Jacques Brel takes on Man of La Manch and you realize a great singer makes all the difference in any language. This program does prove that even mainstream music stations can Go Global.

Comment for "Just Another Fish Story"

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Review of Just Another Fish Story

In the 17th century, Dutch masters were fond of painting a series of works based on the five senses. This piece covers them all in just eight minutes! From word of mouth to weather reports, small town politics to the logistics of grave-digging, the great themes of life, death and immortality are revealed with a good dose of mystery and mythology thrown into the mix as well. The voices are fantastic, the music perfectly evocative and the story - well, near the end, one old-timer says, "If you never did see it you'd never understand it." But he's oh so wrong... This is certainly more than just another fish story!

Comment for "Ahmad's War: Inside Out" (deleted)

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Review of Ahmad's War: Inside Out (deleted)

Quite simply, this is long-form narrative radio journalism at its best. Ahmed's story reveals the complexity of a war which has not ended - which is why this piece still should be heard. Early on I was somewhat concerned there might be too much narration. But it's so well-written and delivered in such a direct yet intimate manner that I was drawn into a world I may have seen on television, but never experienced quite so deeply as now. The use of sound throughout is brilliant. You are there - sharing dinner with a family, shoulder to shoulder with soldiers, celebrating victory too soon. Ahmed himself is such an intelligent, humorous and engaging hero that the understated tragedy of his death is very powerful. Big stories come and go, but the personal stories inside the big stories can be timeless. No matter how much you think you know about the war in Iraq, this story is bound to give you (and your listeners) new insights.

Comment for "Prisioner of Conscience" (deleted)

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Review of Prisioner of Conscience (deleted)

In 1996 at the first Amnesty International film festival in Amsterdam, I interviewed Robert Richter about his disturbing documentary "Inside the School of Assassins" - the story of decorated Vietnam veteran Father Roy Bourgeois's campaign to close the US Army's tax-supported School of the Americas (SOA) at Ft. Benning, Georgia. I was (perhaps naively) shocked that an institution committed to training Latin American soldiers torture techniques even existed, much less on American soil. It's even more chilling to hear that SOA is still in operation, albeit as the Western Hemisphere Institute for Security Cooperation (WHINSEC). That's why I wanted give Prisoner of Conscience a listen. But I was wary of how it might be presented. Voices of Our World is produced by Maryknoll, the Catholic missionary movement of which Father Roy is a member, as is Sister Lil Mattingly who's story makes up the first half of this program. I prepared myself for a certain, shall we say, biased point of view. What I heard instead was the soft-spoken, even timid voice of a 63 year old woman facing six months in prison for "crossing the line" in her efforts to force WHINSEC to "stop teaching people to kill." Rumsfeld and the neo-cons might call this unbalanced, leftist propoganda. I call it a story that needs to be heard - now! It's timely (Sister Lil began her sentence March 15) and, sad to say, timeless. I don't see the present administration changing its current foreign policies any time soon. Though there is a glimmer of hope in the second half of the program in which lay missioner Lisa Sullivan Rodriguez relates the story of her and Father Roy's meeting with Venezuelan president Hugo Chavez who subsequently made the decision to become the first Latin American country to stop sending soldiers to WHINSEC. Two simple interviews with two committed activists who speak from the heart make this compelling listening, especially the first part which could stand alone for news programs not suited to the half-hour format.

Comment for "Lapsarian Hummingbirds"

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Review of Lapsarian Hummingbirds

Leave it to a poet to send me to the dictionary to look up a word like "lapsarian" which I will be hard-pressed to use in conversation. But that can be one of the joys of poetry. The poet and his subject are first introduced in an amusing, folksy style - pity the poor hummingbird pitted against the goundhog's media monopoly. And then the poet introduces the background of the poem - a backyard story of mythic proportions. The poem itself, simply read as often best suits poetry, reflects a world of conflict and greed. Who knew hummingbirds were so human? I only wish their unique sound could've been captured to end the piece instead of the cliche, or a best dated, musical choice.

Comment for "Music At Sea"

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Review of Music At Sea

This piece brought a ray of sunshine to a rainy Sunday morning. A breezy history of music played on ocean liners, simply told with a rich variety of interesting information about hired "dance hosts" for single ladies, Glenn Miller versus Disco and the grotesque inaccuracies of "Love Boat." The balance of narration, speakers and music is just right. It ends with a touching story of the musicians on the Titanic and the haunting melody they played as the ship went down (not "Nearer My God to Thee" as Hollywood and Google would have you believe.) Keep this piece in mind for the April 14 anniversary of the Titanic tragedy - it has broader appeal than just music or arts programming. And don't cut into the very slow fade of music at the end. It's deliberate and very effective!

Comment for "Primary Sources - For Being Who I Am" (deleted)

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Review of Primary Sources - For Being Who I Am (deleted)

The power of this piece proves the principle that sometimes less is more. A few spare, telling details - like a father watching TV wearing headphones - portray a disturbing family rift. The irony of the situation is huge, but understated. The almost monotone delivery belies the emotion one senses just under the surface, straining to keep it together. A short piece of the young man's voice recorded a year earlier subtly reveals the passage of time, the deepening of hurt, the tragedy of loss. I'm at a loss for words. A painful sadness, like a punch to the gut, will not subside any time soon.

Comment for "Sauna - Going "All The Way""

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Review of Sauna - Going "All The Way"

A delightfully gentle reflection on the fears and joys of getting naked with friends and strangers. The narrator's folksy charm seems sincere and his thoughts are intelligent and well written. The use of music and sauna sound moved the piece along at just the right pace. As someone who sometimes gets embarrassed alone in the shower, I could almost imagine myself sitting butt naked in the hot, steamy sauna, relaxed and congenially chatting about the state of the world or my dog's latest antics. Almost, I sigh... Radio is great for the imagination and this piece made me imagine it might be possible. Maybe I should give it a go?

Comment for "Tale of Two Cities"

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Review of Tale of Two Cities

I like personal stories and I thought I'd have a lot in common with this one (albeit my "two cities" are New York and Amsterdam.) And in this respect I wasn't disappointed - the sense of displacement and isolation in both "homes" paints a picture of internal melancholy more than any external place. The narrator draws parallels from banal everyday activities (coffe-to-go) to oddly surreal events (unlikely fowl) as she bounces between real life and scripted introspection. But because the sound recordings are so rough, there is no real difference between the sound of the two cities. I'd like to think this was part of the concept, but if so it's too distracting to be effective. What the piece lacks in recording technique is almost compensated by the writing which is the best part of the story - intelligent and insightful. But it doesn't quite hold the fabric of the whole together for radio.

Comment for "Classically Black - "Celebration — Adolphus Hailstork"" (deleted)

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Review of Classically Black - "Celebration — Adolphus Hailstork" (deleted)

This program introduces the work of a fine contemporary classical composer in two parts. In the first half-hour (after a rather lengthy and dry run-down of his resume), Adolphus Hailstork talks about his musical inspirations and his approach to several compositions. I would have preferred to hear a bit more of the music and a little less of the technical nuts and bolts of musical composition; and perhaps more about the emotional meaning behind the work instead of the structuring of longer pieces. The 2nd half of the program is a live recording of Hailstork's latest Violin Concerto. This piece reveals the true nature of the composer - who communicates more deeply in his music than in his words. That being said, this program should suit any station with a classical music audience.

Comment for "Transgender Bender: Moving Beyond the Binary System" (deleted)

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Review of Transgender Bender: Moving Beyond the Binary System (deleted)

This is an excellent introduction to the issues that confront the transgender community. The mainstream magazine-style structure of the program should appeal to stations which might have qualms about the subject. The first segment introduces an engaging transgender couple navigating the complexities of their relationship with love and a good dose of humor. Next a musician tells recounts her difficult journey toward "gender equalibrium," interspersed with experts defining the elusive term "transgender." And finally, current legislation regarding hate crimes and discrimination is discussed, with a particular distinction between transgendered individuals and the gay and lesbian community at large - an important point often misunderstood. While it bothered me a little that the program became less personal and more narrator driven with each segment, the overview presented is balanced and thorough. The series Making Contact is committed to stories and viewpoints not often heard on mass media. This is a prime example and should not be overlooked by broadcasters.

Comment for "The Beauty of Lois Vierk"

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Review of The Beauty of Lois Vierk

This is a lovely piece about the creative process - not simply of the composer but of the radio maker himself. By carefully blending the voices, the music and, most strikingly, the intervention of nature, a kind of poetry emerges which elevates this work above the ususal arts & culture radio item. I wanted to hear more but the length is part of its beauty. Often the haiku can touch us more deeply than the epic poem.

Comment for "Mothers and Others" (deleted)

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Review of Mothers and Others (deleted)

What words do we use to describe our family? This question becomes particularly difficult for children raised by parents in same-sex relationships. Most stories about queer families are told from the outside looking in (or ranted about from the outside without looking at all.) This piece is a unique view from the inside. The engaging narrator muses on the limited vocabulary available to describe her family and mixes in lively conversations with her mother and sister. The light-hearted take on such serious questions is a breath of fresh air, as is the honest, young voice doing the asking. The issues of same-sex marriage and the traditional use of the word "family" aren't going away any time soon. This piece easily stands alone but could also be used to spark a more in-depth discussion.

Comment for "Jerry Stearns' Dialogue with Martian Trombone"

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Review of Dialogue with Martian Trombone.

There's an interesting time-warp thing going on in this piece - a new radio drama inspired by the sixty year old radio classic "War of the Worlds" written and performed in a style popularized by Firesign Theater some thirty years ago. Some of my fellow drama majors at college in the early 70's were such die-hard fans they'd memorized whole albums and would perform them at parties. Back then I wasn't a great fan of this genre of comedy which also included Cheech & Chong and Monty Python. And after listening to this work, I must admit I'm still not overly enthusiastic. That being said, I admire what the guys at Great Northern Audio Theater are doing here - trying to preserve a endangered art form. In this age of info-media, radio drama -and especially comedy- is a rare bird indeed! Even in Europe where such work is still done in many countries, there is much less airtime devoted to it. But an important distinction seems to be that in Europe, writers and producers are experimenting with new styles and techniques - trying to find a fresh sound that will re-invent the genre. Having recently listened again to War of the Worlds, I was struck by how timeless it sounded, how innovative the writing still seemed. So while I appreciate the work on Martian Trombone (the production elements are excellent!), it seems a bit anachronistic. Maybe that's the point, in which case it would be great for a station with an audience attuned and eager for alternative programming. But I guess I'm left with the question, is this "alternative" in the best sense of the word?

Comment for "Art of the Song #10 with Nanci Griffith & Tom Russell" (deleted)

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Review of Art of the Song with Nanci Griffith & Tom Russell (deleted)

You don't have to be a big fan of folk music (and I am not) to appreciate the creative process behind the songs, and that makes the approach to Art of the Song accessible to a much wider audience. In this case, two hosts are better than one and the fact they are singer/songwriters themselves certainly doesn't hurt. They establish a great rapport with guests at an easy-paced tempo that seems just right for everyone. The balance of music and talk couldn't be better. In this case, Nanci Griffiths is delightful to hear singing or talking about her songs.

Comment for "On a Mission"

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Review of On a Mission

I first heard this piece a couple of years back on Outright Radio - loved it then and loved hearing it again. The stories of two gay men brought up in the Mormon faith are told with equal portions of heart and humor - and effectively mixed with music and songs. The opening is cleverly done; I wish the ending was a bit stronger. But this is a refreshingly light take on a deadly serious issue.

Comment for "Yesterday and Forever" (deleted)

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Review of Yesterday and Forever (deleted)

Beautifully poetic and brutally honest, ethereal and earthy, there really aren't enough adjectives to convey the multitude of feelings this richly textured piece provokes. A child's nightmare come true or a devastating phone call during Sesame Street - the details, banal or sublime, build an aural portrait of loss, grief and remembrence which pull the listener in like an undertow. The mix of every-day voices and other-worldly music is seamless. This is much more than a memorial - this is "must-hear radio!"

Comment for "New Audio Showroom #3 - Audio Mavericks"

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Review of New Audio Showroom #3 - Audio Mavericks

An entertaining magazine-style program - not as unconventional as is overly hyped in the introduction. It's the unconventional guests who give the program its quirky appeal. Gordon has a good ear for audio and artists off the beaten track - and has a good rapport with them in the interviews. The mix of talk and music or live recordings is well-balanced and the whole show moves right along at a good clip. I especially liked the 60's San Fransisco "street terrorizing" comedy team. The segment on the theramin was a bit thin - seemed like maybe it was just a time-filler. (Might be because I recently heard a fascinating half-hour doco about the instrument.) I enjoyed this program very much, but would not call it experimental.

Comment for "The Promise of Hydrogen - two parts"

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Review of The Promise of Hydrogen - two parts

A kind of environmental travelogue, this program takes the listener around Iceland investigating its fascinating experiment to become the first country in the world to switch to hydrogen fuel. The technical info was kept to a minimum so even a science dummy like myself can follow what I'm sure must be a very complicated process. It's nice to hear all the location recordings, lifting the piece from a potentially dry fact-finding mission to a more interesting and colorful journey. It may be a little heavy on narration, but by talking to a wide range of people - including Iceland's President - the issue is discussed on many levels. It's especially timely now with all the attention the rising cost of oil is getting. This program would fit nicely into any science or environmental programming.